phexion's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dueling Winds]

Let The Games Begin...

The name of song you are refering to is dueling banjos. This piece sounds very dated and I like the simple drums in the back.

DJAirWave responds:

Thanks. And I fixed the whole title thing too.

[Action Force Five Theme Song]

Fox Force Five?

I feel a flash movie coming on here, I like the story of action force five but not so hot on the theme song, needs explosions etc.

thatguy669606 responds:

Explosions? In a song? maybe...but, yeah I would love to have a flash to accompany this but I have no skills in flash whatso ever, but if anyone wants to do it for me, be my guest.

[Crimeshare in Aspen]

Aspen Hurts

This sounds like a bad dream! it's erie and slightly annoying for droning on for so long.

MadCow responds:

You're just too ignorant to understand!

[Be Thankful (Piano)]

Be Greatfull

The intro was probably the best part for me and about 58 seconds in I like the windingness of it this piece is slightly subtle and sweet and sounds like a few influences from Final Fantasy style piano work maybe?

Zero123Music responds:

Yes! of course - that guy is a legend.

Thankyou very much for taking your time to review,
and yes, Be greatfull sounds much better lol.

thanks!

[Return of the Knight]

Forsee Greatness

This should deffinatly be made into a flash movie, you have the right atmosphere for story depicted and the sound effects are erie which is awesome. As for the trance/techno part about 4 minutes in, I'de probably take that out as it takes away from the song and go for a anthemic approach with more strings but Great work here!

SkippyFox responds:

i wish i could make flash animations i would have made a animation to this one. ^^' i know there are many ways i could do it and i plan to mix it and fix it in the future ^-~ thank you for kind comment!

[SonicLevel(Custom)]

Sonic A

It does have the feel of a Sonic game but I'de take out some of the high pitch parts as I feel it doesn't really go with the overall track but other than that this is a good piece. let me know when the game is finished. Good Luck!

EpicMastermind responds:

there are a lot of high pitched parts, i'm not sure which ones you mean lol

when the game comes out I will make a song called SonicTFzeromega

[Wyze - My second beat]

Drone

I rarely give bad reviews and when I do I try not to be to critical but there was alot in this one I can point out with easy. It was too short and when it did start to build up at 1:11 in it wasnt much of a build up before it suddenly ended. It also sounds like you've just layed some tracks down and shifted about for a minute or so.

Since it is your second beat and I don't know what program you are using but you need to experiment more and play around with sounds. Also don't be afraid to use slightly complex bass lines as they almost always seem to end up working on rnb tracks. As for the intro, it really sounded like it was going into something good but at 0:08 you symbals lightly coming in, prehaps add your main rhymth or bass there to catch the audience straight away.

Overall, it was a good atempt for a second time and you can either take my advice or not.

Blasphem-E responds:

Thanks for the advice man. This thing isn't finished, I was just wondering how it was so far. Although I'm guessing by your response it takes too long to build. But ya, I'll experiment some more. Thanks

[--=|electronic|=- -|]

Beats Making Day All

After listening I just realised that I sat there for 8 minutes. It does drone on in some parts but its got an infectious groove about it. Good stuff

ciscoXdj responds:

thanks yor comment inspires me

[Duke Nukem Theme (metal cover)]

Awesome

This song is just fucking insane! Dude seriously contact the company and get them to put it in DNF!! Seriously!

Xth responds:

I might do that! Thanks for the score!

[Zelda - Water Dream Theme]

Traquility

This piece is so peacefull and almost epic. Your hard work has really paid off here. Great stuff!

JakesFable responds:

Hehe glad you really liked it, Thanks alot for the comment and review ;)